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Carpe’s video ad: “Up to 56% off — the chain reaction decided”

Running 45 daysFacebook and InstagramWinner

How it opens

“Somewhere between the garage shelf, the green ball down the stairs, and Carpe sticks falling like dominos through a kitchen — a discount…”

Angle: Offer

Why it works

It has run for 45 days and is still running, on 5 ads at once. Brands keep paying only for ads that make money, so this one is proven. A clear deal gives people a reason to act now.

How it’s built
  1. Hook: Somewhere between the garage shelf, the green ball down the stairs, and Carpe sticks falling like dominos through a kitchen — a discount…
  2. Offer: The chain reaction was the pitch: buying direct means you're not paying $20 per stick on Amazon, you're getting up to 56% off with fast shi…
  3. Benefit: What was actually tumbling across that table the whole time:
  4. CTA: Shop now
What to borrow
  • Say the offer plainly in the first line.
  • It has run for over a month: the idea is proven demand, so test it in your own words.
Its words

Up to 56% off — the chain reaction decided

Somewhere between the garage shelf, the green ball down the stairs, and Carpe sticks falling like dominos through a kitchen — a discount got determined. The chain reaction was the pitch: buying direct means you're not paying $20 per stick on Amazon, you're getting up to 56% off with fast shipping instead. What was actually tumbling across that table the whole time: 💧 Stops sweat at the source → Antiperspirant-level control 🦠 Controls odor before it starts → Targets odor-causing bacteria, not just scent 🧴 Quick-drying lotion → Goes on clear, no residue on dress shirts ⏱ 100 hours of sweat and odor control → Clinically tested Get up to 56% off — the offer includes an exfoliating wash, UA wipes, a collector's tote bag, and fast shipping.

Dermatologist tested to stop odor and sweat.

Button: Shop now · Offer: Up to 56% off

What’s said
The transcript

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Where and how long
  • First ran 18 Sep 2026; still running.
  • Run as 5 ads, 5 of them running now.
  • Links to ca.mycarpe.com.
  • Style: Offer.

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