Carpe’s video ad: “Ocean Storm, GRÜNS, and a pizza driver who earned his tip”
Running 82 daysFacebook and InstagramWinner
- How it opens
“A pizza driver walked into the Carpe warehouse and found out about the 56% off bundle before most people reading this did.”
Angle: Offer
- Why it works
It blends a curiosity-driven story with a concrete, stacked offer, so the discount feels like a discovery instead of a plain promotion. The scannable benefit bullets and a recommendation stat give practical reasons to act. The data also shows it has run 81 days, is still active and sits among 5 active ads, which suggests the advertiser keeps investing in it, though this alone doesn't prove why it performs.
Who it speaks to: Adults who want strong sweat and odor control without residue on clothes, especially people in work attire like dress shirts, and deal-seekers who like bundles and freebies.
- How it’s built
- Hook: A pizza driver finds the 56% off bundle before most readers, a story that sparks curiosity and urgency.
- Problem: Explains the product is hard to explain at a door, then frames why the lotion format solves stick transfer and residue.
- Features: Four emoji bullets pair each benefit with a short payoff (sweat control, odor bacteria, clear quick-drying lotion, skin barrier support).
- Proof: Cites a 96% would-recommend figure and a clinical study result, as stated in the ad copy.
- Offer: Up to 56% off with an exfoliating wash, GRÜNS gummies, a collector's tote bag and fast shipping.
- CTA: Shop now button leading to a game-style landing page where you pop bubbles to win prizes.
- What to borrow
- Open with a specific, slightly odd story detail to earn curiosity before you reveal the offer.
- Pair each product feature with a one-line payoff so benefits are quick to scan.
- Stack the offer by listing what is included, so the value feels larger than the discount number alone.
- Send clicks to a playful landing page, like a prize game, to extend the hook and add engagement after the ad.
- Its words
Ocean Storm, GRÜNS, and a pizza driver who earned his tip
A pizza driver walked into the Carpe warehouse and found out about the 56% off bundle before most people reading this did. That bundle exists because Triple Action Protection isn't a simple product to explain at a door — it stops sweat, kills odor-causing bacteria, and supports the skin barrier in a single application. The lotion format is why: it absorbs fast, goes on clear, and doesn't transfer to clothing the way a stick does. 💧 Stops sweat at the source → Antiperspirant-level control that lasts 🦠 Controls odor-causing bacteria before odor starts → Clinically tested to reduce them significantly 🧴 Quick-drying lotion → Goes on clear, no residue on dress shirts 🌿 Supports a healthier skin barrier → 100% showed improvement in clinical study 96% would recommend Carpe to a friend. The current offer — up to 56% off — includes an exfoliating wash, GRÜNS gummies, a collector's tote bag, and fast shipping.
Dermatologist tested to stop odor and sweat.
Button: Shop now · Offer: 56% off
- Where and how long
- First ran 13 Aug 2026; still running.
- Run as 6 ads, 6 of them running now.
- Links to mycarpe.com.
- Style: Demo, Product shot, Offer.
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